Ooooooooh the next scene is gonna be like >_< But the way you ended this part was great, how the ring at the end was just the punctuation full stop it needed.

That part about Die falling asleep, that was real to life tho as I am sure you know LOL His scene with Kyo is great, and Kyo's confession at the end. Kyo in this is more complex, because that is the way he should always be.